Go over your writing again, checking for errors in grammar, usage, mechanics, and spelling. In real speech, people sometimes break the rules of grammar. You may do so in written dialog to make it sound like real speech. So, focus on the rules of grammar.
When we have learned or mastered a new skill, we feel proud of our accomplishment. In your autobiographical writing, write about one of your major accomplishments. Tell your readers who helped you, where you were, how you felt while working on acquiring it, and how you felt after accomplishing it. Also, clearly reveal what this learning means to you.
a. Write your essay in an organized way, presenting a sequence of true events relating ideas, observations, and recollections of learning a new skill.
b. Include details that describe people, setting, and actions.
c. Add dialogue that helps reveal your characters’ personalities.
d. Include your thoughts and feelings about the experience.
e. Make sure you stick to first-person point of view